Well I'm not sure about this one. The main thing I'm going to be focusing on in this post of mine is Grammar. Being a tutor means you're going to be a Teacher to other members, and your grammar has to be in tip top shape.
As I can see in the OP, you have quite a bit of Grammar errors such as missing periods, capital letters, punctuation, mispelled words, etc. On another note, tutoring has nothing to do with rank hosting as one thing has to deal with one thing and the other with something different.